outstretched: (PKMN ♥ [group] Rivals keep you going)
For every mile of ocean crossed ☆ ([personal profile] outstretched) wrote in [personal profile] axolotl 2012-08-28 06:35 am (UTC)

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SHRIEKING PETREL -> LOOKER IS SO PERFECT, you caught me by surprise!!

I also really loved all the drawings with that yellow dress, the colors are so gorgeously chosen and they work together so well, and Zoroark and Julie back to back is charming and touching and ;_;. I am ferverently hoping for Zoroark to be okay!

I also wanted to say that I can't believe that you are managing to make me buy Black/Silver/Julie WHILE all this crazy plot stuff is going on. YOU ARE NUTS. But that scene where Black points at Silver and Silver clutches at his hand, that made my heart melt. That whole scene sort of turned me into goo. It wasn't fluffy but it hurt and was also perfect? I don't know.

SO MANY GODDAMN PATRATS.

I like how with /this/ battle scene you start with that strong basis in game mechanics that we talked about before, and then you spin it apart. It sort of unravels like pulling at a loose thread in a rug. It's fascinating! Also chaotic in the best way.

You also have tons of great lines, like Silver's response to Giovanni omg ;_;, everything out of Zoroark's mouth...I really grew to like Zoroark!

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