I'll admit I went into this story a bit on the skeptical side because reading the summary, I didn't know how you could make all that work in only a few chapters. I'm happy I stuck through- the way you interpret canon is original, to say the least, and I mean that as a compliment, and your dialogue and characterization is excellent. Cynthia in particular was fun to read.

Overall I found this a fun ride and a neat look at some familiar game characters. I too would love to see a continuation of Silver's story.