Sigh, I will have to leave the fic here for tonight, but I'm really glad you don't end every chapter on a cliffhanger or I'd never get any sleep.
I don't think your Cynthia characterization is terrible. Hilarious? Yes. Interesting and multifaceted? Definitely.
Did you...riff off my Silver+Crobat story to turn Crobat into a transgendered pokemon? That's...what even, that is so crazy and amazing. Overall, knowing the back story that's already been set up from the two stories in this universe (yours and keltena's) and my sliver+crobat story (I guess??) is just...really fun? I don't read a lot of stories where there are whole universes built up, and this one is really interesting. You should probably give fair warning that people should read certain stories first, though, before reading this one—I'm not sure people will understand it as well (or enjoy it as much, tbh) without the back history. (Green and Silver drinking seltzer and glaring at everyone made me laugh!)
Any time Green is mentioned even the tiniest bit I still feel like bawling, though. I am really astounded that you had the chutzpah to do that to all those characters. Jesus, you went for the jugular, don't you?
I feel like I want to know more about Looker, because although he's obviously badass and hilarious (what even, old muscular stewardess), he does seem rather flat. Julie is adorable, this plotline is really interesting, I cannot get enough of all the dialogue and the character interactions because there is no way on earth I'd be able to handle this many characters this fluidly.
Mostly this fic makes a lot of good and interesting points, even though some are made at a slight credibility cost (no straight people are allowed into this party, evidently). I'm really enjoying the discussions on gender and relationship dynamics, wrapped up in this plotty gritty noir story that has vamp vixens and girls in comas and tough-guy secret agents.
Um, where the fuck is Red? Call me a diehard fangirl but...I want to know.
I think that's my brain dump for now. I will be back on the morrow to continue sobbing all over this fic and telling you how much I love it :D please don't feel the need to reply to the ten million comments I've left all over this fic, btw! That would be obnoxious, I'm sorry I've been so obnoxious. I JUST HAVE SO MANY FEELINGS.
no subject
I don't think your Cynthia characterization is terrible. Hilarious? Yes. Interesting and multifaceted? Definitely.
Did you...riff off my Silver+Crobat story to turn Crobat into a transgendered pokemon? That's...what even, that is so crazy and amazing. Overall, knowing the back story that's already been set up from the two stories in this universe (yours and keltena's) and my sliver+crobat story (I guess??) is just...really fun? I don't read a lot of stories where there are whole universes built up, and this one is really interesting. You should probably give fair warning that people should read certain stories first, though, before reading this one—I'm not sure people will understand it as well (or enjoy it as much, tbh) without the back history. (Green and Silver drinking seltzer and glaring at everyone made me laugh!)
Any time Green is mentioned even the tiniest bit I still feel like bawling, though. I am really astounded that you had the chutzpah to do that to all those characters. Jesus, you went for the jugular, don't you?
I feel like I want to know more about Looker, because although he's obviously badass and hilarious (what even, old muscular stewardess), he does seem rather flat. Julie is adorable, this plotline is really interesting, I cannot get enough of all the dialogue and the character interactions because there is no way on earth I'd be able to handle this many characters this fluidly.
Mostly this fic makes a lot of good and interesting points, even though some are made at a slight credibility cost (no straight people are allowed into this party, evidently). I'm really enjoying the discussions on gender and relationship dynamics, wrapped up in this plotty gritty noir story that has vamp vixens and girls in comas and tough-guy secret agents.
Um, where the fuck is Red? Call me a diehard fangirl but...I want to know.
I think that's my brain dump for now. I will be back on the morrow to continue sobbing all over this fic and telling you how much I love it :D please don't feel the need to reply to the ten million comments I've left all over this fic, btw! That would be obnoxious, I'm sorry I've been so obnoxious. I JUST HAVE SO MANY FEELINGS.